The Water Poem

We were learning about how to write a poem about was we seen at wakina what found out is it was a place that people put there rubbish at but now there's water but its still yuck. You cant even see the bottom of the water that's how much rubbish the trees done even go over the water too it and dogs get sick from it.

I found it easy to copy my work my book and put it on my chromebook plus remembering what smell and what I seen with my eyes and remembering the details what seen what I found what I smelled and what I touched its very easy give it a try.

I found it challenging to spell the words correctly with out getting it wrong i'm not the best speller but I give it a try another thing that is hard is writing it in a book cause my hands get tied.

Next time I will  get a dixernery to find the words.                                                                   

The water.

The colour of the water is brown.

 It can flow fast and slow. There's heaps of trash in the dark water.

 You can't see the bottom of the water.

 There's heaps of low numbered water animals. 

There's not enough air in the water.

 There's heaps of salt because of the beach. There's no tree's cothering the river.

 Balls and trash get chucked in the river.

It's a waste down there.

Dogs go swimming down there too.

It's right next to the beach.

It is the most unhealthy river that I'd seen before.

The one at the wild lab is way healthier.

And it smelled  yuck.

No kind of Mayfly can live in there or it's gonna die.

No one would ever swim there only if it was cleaner.