The Amazing Awapuni Fun Run

We were learning about how to try and write with nouns, adjective, verb, adverb, capital letters and full stops.

I found it easy to copy it from my book to my chromebook.

I found it challenging to put adverbs in my paragraphs.

Next time I will ask somebody for help.

 The Amazing Awapuni Fun Run

Yay! It was the amazing Awapuni fun run today we all were so happy. So we all started paying attention to the teachers but some kid didn't. Then we got change in to our cloths I got blue shorts and a blue shirt Mrs Bava said to line up then all of us excitedly standed up and formed a line. But we had to wait for the little kids to have there race we gone on this blue mat / rug then we started standing up and saying yay go Mrs Bava got a drone and turned it on but it falled over. But they were in year groups for the race but for us we gone as the team the was kids from intermediet coming to do it for their little brothers and sisters when they came back they had paint all over them self we started laughing then Mahanga got a rubber band and used it like a slingshot.

Then we said yay because it was a rare term to do the fun run. The year 5 boys had to go by the blue flag then we went under and up top of the tyres I went over it then we went to the easy maze. Some people cheated they went under the string then there was the hay we jumped over it then it was time to go in the muddy disaster one person dived then there was the watery disaster I dived that time then there was police.

The police holded the net we gone on the track then we gone into the dry paint it smelt yuck but got red paint all over my head then it gone over again and again I done five laps but Mahanga said he done ten laps but he was lying he done three laps then one of the student leaders said thank you then everyone gone in class but when they got changed.